I see a budding bloom
wafting in the breeze
Its petals beckon to the bees
like the newly wedded groom
I see a budding bloom
Gazing towards the trees
a blossom hopes to please
Like the new bride’s swoon
I see a budding bloom
Night comes in like a tease
And the flower feels unease
But under the light of the rising moon
I see a budding bloom

Image is courtesy of Reenas Xploration Challenge via Japanese Artist Raku Inoue.
I was inspire by this image and dverse poets ballata poetry form challenge. I’m not sure if I like my finished product, but it was a fun challenge! Thanks!
I love the wedding theme with the refrain: I see a budding bloom.
Like the newly wedded groom and new bride’s swoon, this poem is filled with promises and hope. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks. It was a fun challenge 😊
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So beautifully written
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Thank you ☺️
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You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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Creative connection between blossoms and weddings. Love is in the air with each.
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😊💚
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So romantic and cool — I dig Tina! 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thanks Rob 😊
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You have written a fine poem! It has rhythm and is well rhymed. It works very well Tina.
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Thank you so much 😊
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You shift the mood with this one
Night comes in like a tease
And the flower feels unease
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😊🤓
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So romantic, beautifully written, Tina.
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Thank you ☺️
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This is lovely, Tina!
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You’ve crafted a wonderful poem! The rhythm is captivating, and the rhyme flows perfectly. It’s truly impressive, Tina!
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Lovely. I really enjoy these lines: “Its petals beckon to the bees
like the newly wedded groom”
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Thank you 🙂
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