Rising wall of blue
Chaos spins from his still eye
Exodus denied
Thanks to Susi at I Write Her for a great photo challenge.
I live in Florida, so obviously Dorian has been on my mind for the last week. Feel free to interpret this piece as a statement on that bitch! Thankfully, we got off pretty lucky here, but the Bahamas were hit HARD. If you can, think about helping. They will need it. You can find links to some legit efforts at Bahama Relief .
But I also live in Trump’s America, so (for me at least) my words have another layer of meaning. Feel free to reinterpret them or guess my thoughts, if you’d like. That’s the beauty of poetry.
Plus, never forget he’s either just an idiot or a thin-skinned shallow narcissistic purposefully-uninformed idiot. #Dorian #nevergonnahitAlabama #doctoredphoto #nicesharpiejob
AP Photo from the Washington Post
Brilliant!!
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I agree with Lisa!! 🙂
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You could change your last line of your poem to Abscent Exodus to edit down to 5 syllables 😉
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I like that! And I may 😉🤪
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Oh good came up with your own…has a better flow spoken 🙂
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Thanks 😊
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Nice that you included the bit about Dorian. Makes your haiku even more powerful. Kudos!
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Thank you!
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