the light of a star
as our journey’s companion
may shine like a sun
wall of sound
the echo of time
journey’s end
Today, our Tanka Tuesday prompt is to write haiku in the style of Bashō. I’m not sure if I succeeded but I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks to Selma for hosting Tanka Tuesday.
Tina Stewart Brakebill 
Tina, I like this, it has strong imagery and metaphor, giving an evocative sense of journey🙌
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Thanks so much Ange. 💚
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I’m pretty sure Basho would dig it as much as I do!
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Aaah Ron ☺️ Thanks
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You do give us a sense of a fulfilled journey.
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Thanks Esther ☺️
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It’s beautiful
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Thanks Sadje. 🧡
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You’re welcome
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it’s composed in a way the master would approve. Eloquent. Thanks for joining. So beautiful
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Thank you so much for your kind words ☺️
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hug
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Gorgeous, Tina!
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Tina, both of your haiku are wonderful. I love the sense of traveling (through the stars). What an adventure. 💜
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Thanks Colleen ☺️
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