alone with my thoughts
blank ripples on the white space
the canvas whispers
sweet nothings to nobody
my solitude unbroken

Claude Monet. The Studio Boat (Le Bateau-atelier), 1876, Oil on canvas.
Today’s challenge from dVerse asks us to do either of the below:
- You may write an ekphrastic poem inspired by Claude Monet’s “The Studio Boat.” Your poem does not need to include anything about reflecting or reflections, but it can. AND/OR
- You may write a poem on reflection, whatever that means to you—self-reflection, reflection on time’s passing, a reflection in a pool of water, etc.
I’ve been struggling with a bit of writers/creative block so this is my reflection on that unsettling feeling.
Visit the dVerse page for more info on the prompt:
I like “blank ripples on white space.” Hopefully the block does not last for long!
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Thanks!
I hope so too. It’s a weird frustrating feeling.
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You’re welcome. I’m sure it must be.
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Very good, short but poignant.
The ending is great: “my solitude unbroken”.
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Thank you 😊
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Beautiful
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Thanks ☺️
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Welcome
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Tina, I could absolutely see that in this image.
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Thank you. ☺️
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You’re welcome, Tina.
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Who knew getting nowhere goes there too!
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Wise words 🤓 Thanks!
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This is beautiful Tina
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Thank you 😊
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You’re welcome
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A nice reflection. Sometimes it is he silent solitude that inspires!
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Thank you 😊
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You are welcome.
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”blank ripples on the white space” [!!!] this is such a nice line for a tanka! he carries the power right in the middle. I also like how we hear the sweet nothings whispered by the painting right after the Volta. Oh, so nice. Thank you very much.
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Thank you for your very kind words!! ☺️
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Such places invite to inward journeys
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Absolutely. Thanks for reading 😊
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love the exquisiteness in the simplicity of your verse (much like painting).
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Thank you so much. ☺️
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Love those “blank ripples on the white space.” Exquisite write ❤️
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Thank you so much 😊
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A lovely reflection 👏
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Thank you ☺️
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Oh, beautiful reflection, Tina!
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Thank you ☺️
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My pleasure. 😊
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I find it a very honest and delicate poem. You manage to simply convey that feeling of silence and creative block, lending a tranquil beauty to a difficult moment.
Have a wonderful start to the week. 🤗🌻
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Thanks for your kind words 😊
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