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autumn leaves falling

days turn and the years fly by

sunrise and coffee

our breath floating in the breeze

old jackets warm and faded

24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 51, 9/10/24, Part II: White Dew (September 7 – 22) Hakuro 白露

Published by Tina Stewart Brakebill

Stine Writing and Miniatures says:

September 10, 2024 at 8:55 pm

I never thought I would miss the fall season. Living in the south there isn’t one, I am hopeful though that the weather will get a bit cooler.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  September 11, 2024 at 6:47 am
  
  I lived in Florida for 6 years. I hated not having seasons. Love this time of year.
  
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  1. Stine Writing and Miniatures says:
    
    September 15, 2024 at 5:26 pm
    
    Yeah, I’m about over it. I don’t miss the snow and ice but I do miss some of the comfortable chill.
    
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Sadje says:

September 11, 2024 at 4:03 am

A lovely autumnal poem

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  September 11, 2024 at 6:46 am
  
  Thank you.
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    September 11, 2024 at 7:43 am
    
    You’re welcome ☺️
    
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msjadeli says:

September 11, 2024 at 5:06 pm

What Sadje said 🙂

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Gwen M. Plano says:

September 11, 2024 at 6:19 pm

Beautiful! Autumn draws near in our area, and I love every moment of it. 🌞

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Melissa Lemay says:

November 27, 2024 at 10:29 pm

I feel the comfort in this.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  November 28, 2024 at 8:45 am
  
  Thanks 😊
  
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