boundless autumn days
burning red and yellow haze
the muddled trees weep
as the sparrows soar and sing
lifted by the sun’s last bloom
Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration. Visit her for more fun stuff and great writing .
ode to autumn’s sunflower
Tina Stewart Brakebill 
Tina, your poem is exquisite. The last line really touched me.🌻
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Thank you so much 😊
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A beautiful thought – sun’s last bloom giving way to autumn!
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Thanks! 😊
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This is so beautiful Tina
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Thank you. ☺️
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You’re welcome
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the muddled trees weep
great line, Tina, in a beautiful tanka.
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you are very kind. thanks.
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You’re welcome.
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Love the glory of Sunflowers 💜💜
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Thank you! ☺️
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Your poem is so beautiful, Tina. I love it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks so much. 😊
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Tina, this verse is so beautiful. ❤
~David
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You are too kind. Thank you. ☺️
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🤗
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What a lovely poem for the season! I could see it. 🙂
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You are kind. Thank you 😊
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A lovely tanka,Tina , every word is worth its weight in gold 🌻
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Thanks 😊
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