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The Sound & Motion of Your Heart

March 11, 2019January 29, 2020 Tina Stewart Brakebill

when day turns to night

the echo of your heartbeat

stays my fleeing soul

affection afterglow backlit blur — Photo by luizclas on Pexels.com

Thanks to Ronovan Writes for the inspiration.

I used synonyms today: echo and heartbeat (for sound) and heartbeat and fleeing (for motion).

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8 thoughts on “The Sound & Motion of Your Heart”

Liz Bennefeld says:

March 11, 2019 at 8:48 pm

Lovely thought

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  March 11, 2019 at 9:11 pm
  
  ☺️ thank you.
  
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Ennle Madresan says:

March 14, 2019 at 3:10 pm

Ooooh, yes! Love this one.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  March 14, 2019 at 3:23 pm
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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  1. Ennle Madresan says:
    
    March 14, 2019 at 3:23 pm
    
    You are SO welcome! 🙂
    
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Susi Bocks says:

March 22, 2019 at 11:46 pm

This is beautiful, Tina! Would you consider participating in my weekly haiku challenge? I would love to see what your interpretations would be. The weekly submission deadline is Saturday.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  March 23, 2019 at 6:30 am
  
  Thanks Susi! I will check it out. I promise. I’ve been a little overwhelmed with our move but I’m beginning to dig out. 🤪
  
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  1. Susi Bocks says:
    
    March 23, 2019 at 9:57 am
    
    Excellent! 🙂
    
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