when day turns to night
the echo of your heartbeat
stays my fleeing soul
Thanks to Ronovan Writes for the inspiration.
I used synonyms today: echo and heartbeat (for sound) and heartbeat and fleeing (for motion).
The Sound & Motion of Your Heart
Tina Stewart Brakebill 
Lovely thought
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☺️ thank you.
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Ooooh, yes! Love this one.
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Thank you so much!
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You are SO welcome! 🙂
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This is beautiful, Tina! Would you consider participating in my weekly haiku challenge? I would love to see what your interpretations would be. The weekly submission deadline is Saturday.
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Thanks Susi! I will check it out. I promise. I’ve been a little overwhelmed with our move but I’m beginning to dig out. 🤪
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Excellent! 🙂
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