Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

under the night sky I waver

under the night sky I waver

as moonbeams penetrate my shroud

baring that fateful palaver

under the night sky I waver

 wishing I had once been braver

but the die was cast as I bowed

 under the night sky I waver

as moonbeams penetrate my shroud

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Today, Reena asks us to consider: THE MASKS WE FORGOT TO REMOVE

Let your protagonist (fictional or real) explore the following aspects.

  • Has it become too comfortable?
  • Concealing an unpalatable truth
  • Being haunted by their own disguise
  • The silence after the revelry when real selves do not return

 The RD Prompt (WAVER) seemed to fit into my thoughts as I played around with the idea of the consequences of decisions contrary to your true self. At least I think that may be what I was going for. It took its own course-as words sometimes do.  

Plus, I’m clearly obsessed with the Triolet this week.

A Triolet is an 8-line poem where lines repeat in a beautiful rhythm:

Lines 1, 4, and 7 are the same, and lines 2 and 8 are also repeated.

The rhyme scheme looks like this: ABaAabAB (uppercase = repeated lines).

If you’d like to make it a little trickier, try writing each line with 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter, the classic French style) — or challenge yourself with 10 syllables per line (the English version). [I did 8-syllables today.]  

Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

it’s dark at 4pm! (a haiku)

in the dead of night

seduced by a false prophet

time’s veil falls again  

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This is my ode to the horror of the November “fall back” time change. It messes up my sleep and it really does get dark by 4:30pm. ARGGG! Thanks to Yvette and Tanka Tuesday for the inspiration to vent. 

 

Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

we are the ones

we are the ones that dwell within

watching and waiting for the end

in the dark we witness your sin

 

we are the ones that dwell within

that burn you feel under your skin

the edge of madness at the bend 

 

we are the ones that dwell within

watching and waiting for the end

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I enjoyed creating a triolet earlier this week for the w3 prompt, so I did it again. But this time I went with the 8-syllable version and leaned into the SPOOKY. Thanks for the added inspiration to Esther (EDGE) and dVerse poets (we are the ones that dwell within). See below for info on Triolets.

According to Sarah Whiley … 

A Triolet is an 8-line poem where lines repeat in a beautiful rhythm:

Lines 1, 4, and 7 are the same, and lines 2 and 8 are also repeated.

The rhyme scheme looks like this: ABaAabAB (uppercase = repeated lines).

If you’d like to make it a little trickier, try writing each line with 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter, the classic French style) — or challenge yourself with 10 syllables per line (the English version).