the promise
a funhouse mirror
real life
a moment of calm
nature in blurred reflection
ambiguity

I’ve been MIA for a bit, so thanks to Susi for luring me back with birds!
Writer. Feminist. Historian. Person.
the promise
a funhouse mirror
real life
a moment of calm
nature in blurred reflection
ambiguity

I’ve been MIA for a bit, so thanks to Susi for luring me back with birds!
sparkling in the sun
deadly white and cold as ice
winter’s wicked gift

Is it over yet? Thanks to Yvette and the Tanka Tuesday Challenge.
angels weep stone tears
the house stands cold and empty
all because she blinked

Angels are always going to remind me of my favorite Doctor (10/14) and those absolutely terrifying set of bad guys-the Weeping Angels! Thanks to Esther and the RDP for the inspirational prompt words of ANGEL and HOUSE.
as our memories fade away
misty behind a shadowed veil
the jagged edges dulled with fray
as our memories fade away
ego and shame stop holding sway
the once vibrant shades turn to pale
as our memories fade away
misty behind a shadowed veil

Image credit; Mohsen Karimi @ Unsplash
Inspired by WDYS’s photo prompt and my own fading memories 😉
I played around with a couple of different styles, but I felt it worked best with the Triolet, which is an 8-line poem where lines repeat in rhythm:
Lines 1, 4, and 7 are the same, and lines 2 and 8 are also repeated.
The rhyme scheme looks like this: ABaAabAB (uppercase = repeated lines).
If you’d like to make it a little trickier, try writing each line with 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter, the classic French style) — or challenge yourself with 10 syllables per line (the English version). I chose the 8-syllable version today.
vibrating, I walk
my heart tinged by tragedy
greed cracks earth’s spirit
but your presence calms despair
strings of resistance lift all

It’s Sunday Whirl time! Let’s keep HOPE alive!
