Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

we are the ones

we are the ones that dwell within

watching and waiting for the end

in the dark we witness your sin

 

we are the ones that dwell within

that burn you feel under your skin

the edge of madness at the bend 

 

we are the ones that dwell within

watching and waiting for the end

Photo by Zachary DeBottis on Pexels.com

 

I enjoyed creating a triolet earlier this week for the w3 prompt, so I did it again. But this time I went with the 8-syllable version and leaned into the SPOOKY. Thanks for the added inspiration to Esther (EDGE) and dVerse poets (we are the ones that dwell within). See below for info on Triolets.

According to Sarah Whiley … 

A Triolet is an 8-line poem where lines repeat in a beautiful rhythm:

Lines 1, 4, and 7 are the same, and lines 2 and 8 are also repeated.

The rhyme scheme looks like this: ABaAabAB (uppercase = repeated lines).

If you’d like to make it a little trickier, try writing each line with 8 syllables (iambic tetrameter, the classic French style) — or challenge yourself with 10 syllables per line (the English version).

 

Haiku & Other Poetry, Random Rants, tutto e niente

“she had it coming”

donning my own unique style

 BUT

why so sad

you’d be pretty if you smiled

 

throw a punch

shake a hand   

your smile is the spark

 

rough words

polite talk

your smile is the spark

 

amusing tale

grim reaping

your smile is the spark

Photo by Marco Antonio Casique Reyes on Pexels.com

 

Don’t blame the prompts for my 44-word dark take. I’m just feeling cynical today. Check out both MLMM and dVerse for the rules and some great writing.

 

 

Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

on the threshold

an open doorway

eyes open as you step up

your heart unguarded

an all or nothing wager

endless possibilities

Photo by Tara Winstead on Pexels.com

 I was inspired by two challenges today.

Reena’s xploration challenge invited us to explore the space of Passages, Doorways, Thresholds, and/or Transitions, which dovetailed beautifully with dVerse Poets Banned Book challenge. As an avid ally for the trans/non-binary community, I was drawn to the following quote from Susan Kuklin’s book Beyond Magenta.  

 … my subjects’ willingness to brave bullying and condemnation in order to reveal their individual selves makes it impossible to be nothing less than awestruck.”

Check out both sites for more information on the challenges and for some great writing.

Haiku & Other Poetry, Random Rants, tutto e niente

September Ends: So What?

As someone who lived in the Midwest United States, I am obsessed with the weather. It’s hard not to be. It can shift rapidly, not just daily but hourly.

I also know that when I talk about the weather, I often say “when I was a kid ….” And although it may be annoying to the youths, it is the truth. When I was a kid, September meant the end of summer (not just the start of school), Halloween costumes were almost always hidden by our winter coats, it often snowed at Thanksgiving, and we always had snow at Christmas. What this September taught me AGAIN was that the weather has shifted. It was as hot as hell. It was nearly 90 degrees (Fahrenheit) last week. Every day I would shake my fist at the sky and yell I need summer to STOP!

Thank goodness, the second week of October has finally brought some cooler temperatures. October means sporty jackets and cute boots and hot chocolate and afternoon walks and fall foliage and … Oh NO! October is already halfway over. November looms with its dark days and cold nights and … actually, November last year was beautiful. Did I mention that the weather has shifted. Climate change is undoubtably real and really bad for the planet, but it is nice that it rarely snows before January now. (We need a sarcasm font.)

And now quick verse to summarize the above rant. 

when September ends

Summer’s green days fade away

A fable once told   

now October’s sun burns red

an admonitory tale  

Thanks to FOWC (NEED) and the writer’s workshop and dVerse for their challenges to reflect on September and October. 

Plus, I would be remiss if I didn’t give a shout out to Green Day’s Wake Me When September Ends

 

Haiku & Other Poetry, Random Rants, tutto e niente

falling

I love the Fall. I love jackets and scarves and boots and hot chocolate and blustery days. But I also love the feel of Fall. I love knowing that the changing colors and the bare tree branches aren’t just about the end of summer. Falling leaves are a vital part of the cycle of life. I also love the crackle under our feet when I’m walking hand and hand with my guy. We’ve had a lot of Autumn walks in our many years together and Autumn really does bring renewed love.

But mostly, I love the BOOTS!

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memories unwind

of soft scarves and falling leaves

autumn’s love renewed 

thanks for a great inspiration.