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SenHai-Saturday (the moon and my mind)

Tina Stewart Brakebill

the moon turns its face

and the sea mourns salty tears

as summer burns hot

 

harmonic breaking

turmoil as a design flaw

my chaotic mind

 

Shifaaz shamoon – Unsplash.com

 Thanks to Susi for the great prompt to create one senryu and one haiku to accompany the image (above). As a remember, a traditional haiku describes nature or a season, while a senryu focuses on human nature and emotions.

SenHai Saturday #15

 

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7 thoughts on “SenHai-Saturday (the moon and my mind)”

  1. The moon, the sea and the summer are truly in harmony in your first piece, and the second is a great comparison to the human state at times! Brilliant, Tina! So happy that you joined in. 🙂 Will you be participating in The Short of It this submission cycle?

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