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still

May 6, 2024 Tina Stewart Brakebill

her heart still exposed

cracked open and still bleeding

still it’s not enough

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Thanks to Sadje.

What do you see # 237- May 6, 2024

Published by Tina Stewart Brakebill

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12 thoughts on “still”

Sadje says:

May 6, 2024 at 7:28 am

A tragedy narrated in so few words, so beautifully Tina. We need to be more proactive to save our planet. Thanks for joining in.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  May 6, 2024 at 8:50 am
  
  ☺️
  
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  1. Sadje says:
    
    May 6, 2024 at 11:13 am
    
    🙏🏼
    
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Chris Hall says:

May 6, 2024 at 10:48 am

Good one, Tina.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  May 6, 2024 at 11:15 am
  
  thanks 🙂
  
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Mason Bushell says:

May 6, 2024 at 2:42 pm

So tragic in so few words. beautifully done.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  May 6, 2024 at 3:10 pm
  
  thank you for your kind words
  
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  1. Mason Bushell says:
    
    May 6, 2024 at 3:11 pm
    
    You’re welcome.
    
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tenzenmen says:

May 7, 2024 at 12:40 am

I like the titular repetition. 👍

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Nicole Horlings says:

May 8, 2024 at 2:20 pm

A poignant haiku, Tina.

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  May 8, 2024 at 2:47 pm
  
  Thank you ☺️
  
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