Haiku & Other Poetry, tutto e niente

Dust Mites & Cosmos

September 8, 2018January 29, 2020 Tina Stewart Brakebill

dances with dust mites ~

distant motes of light sparkle ~

cosmos reveals life ~

milky way illustration — Photo by Philippe Donn on Pexels.com

Writing Prompt Courtesy of Putting My Feet in the Dirt

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3 thoughts on “Dust Mites & Cosmos”

Barb says:

September 8, 2018 at 8:42 pm

I love your haiku
but would love them even more
if you lined up the left margin
and eliminated the squiggly dash

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1. Tina Stewart Brakebill says:
  
  September 8, 2018 at 8:47 pm
  
  I will consider seriously the wisdom of your words 😎
  
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